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Tangled in a Web

Tangled in a Web

Most mornings Elsie climbed to the hilltop, watched the sun rise, and studied spiderwebs. The works of art were also hunting tools: dainty yet deadly. 

She wondered whether the insects that fell prey were hypnotized by those silky strands, beaded in glorious dew, and were lured by their beauty before being snared and dissolved. She exhaled deeply. 

When Elsie pushed open the front door, she took note of his broad shoulders, square chin, and alluring cologne. He scowled. “Don’t give me that look, and don’t even ask. I’ll be back when I get back. Probably late.”

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29 thoughts on “Tangled in a Web”

    1. I guess it won’t come as a surprise that, when I wrote this, I was thinking about a relationship that I’ve heard described as narcissistic. I wonder if they’re more common these days or just more talked about. Either way, a very difficult place to be.

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      1. I had one. I didn’t know it was a thing – it was eons ago – I was only 21-26. When I think of those five years – I won’t say wasted because everything is a lesson… He was so good at turning on the charm when I was ready to leave. Me, dummy, stuck around.

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      2. I like that you say years are never wasted! Yes, we’re all stronger because of the trials, but I’m sorry you had to walk that road. The charm is the real kicker, especially when it’s all other people see.

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  10. Nice switch at the end there. Yes, the victims of the narcissist never really understand what they are slowly losing, one step at a time. Until it’s all gone that is. Hopefully she, and they are able to move on when the time is right.

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